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【英文作文】中美学生经济来源比较  

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【英文作文】               中美学生经济来源比较

                                                                                      佳中

                                                       

Directions:

       Study the table on the comparison of Income Sources Between Chinese and 

American Students. In the essay you should

      1) describe the table and interpret its meanings, and

      2) give your comment.

                       


                                          英文作文(47)中美学生经济来源比较 - 佳中 - 嘉华相恋


                                Income Sources Between Chinese and American Students

 

                                                                        American Students                   Chinese Students

            Parenbtal Financial Support                       50%                                              90%

            Part-time Job Income                                    35%                                                5%

            Fellowshipn or Scholarship                        15%                                                5%

 

 

          构思

                       第一段: 点题:中国学生和美国学生收入来源有差异

                                      描述:1) money from patents

                                                2) money from part-time job and from fellowship or scholarship 

                       第二段:  原因起段句

                                       原因:1)中国父母广泛关爱孩子,宁愿省俭用为孩子支付学费

                                                       美国父母注意培养孩子经济上自立

                                                  2)美国是发达国家,学生有较多打工机会

                                                       中国学生打工机会有限

                       第三段:  1) 相信随着社会经济的发展,中国学生认识自立的重要性

                                             有更多的打工机会

                                       2) 更重要的是, 中国学生走出 irony tower,,多接触社会

 

范文

       As is shown in the table,  income  sources  of  Chinese  students are quite different 

from those of American students.  Chinese students get  90% of their money from their 

parents while American students only 50%. Chinese  students  earn  only  5%  of  their  

money  from part-time  jobs  and  5 %  from  fellowship  or   scholarship   while  income  

from  these  two sources for American students takes up 35%  and  15 %  of  their total 

income respectively.


        From  my  point  of  view, there  are  two  main reasons for these differences. For one 

thing, most Chinese parents tend  to  show  too  much  care  for  their  children  and  they 

would rather save a lot to pay for their children’s education than encourage  them  to  do 

part-time jobs. But, in America, many parents attach more importance to developing their 

children’s ability of self-reliance.  They  encourage  their  children  to  find  part-time  jobs 

rather  than  provide  them  with  everything.  So  American students have developed the 

sense of being  financially  independent. For  another,  since America is more developed 

than  China,  it  is  relatively  easy  for  students  to   find   part-time   jobs  while  in  China 

opportunities for students to get suitable part-time jobs are still rather limited.


        I  am  confident  that,  with  China’s  socioeconomic  development,  more  and more 

Chinese students will realize and pay more attention to the necessity of self-reliance. In 

addition, more  opportunities  will  be  provided for them to take part-time jobs and earn 

ome money on their own.  More  important,  they  can  go  out of the irony tower to have 

more contact with the society.                 

                                                                                                                                     (255 words)


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